For last year’s SOL March Challenge I wrote 31 poems about birds. This year, I’m challenging myself to write 31 poems about spring, my favorite season. I decided to give myself 31 spring poems for my 68th birthday, which is in April! Here I go!
Thank you to Stacey and the TWT staff for offering up this SOL March Challenge. This is my 3rd year, and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. I’ve learned so much and connected with so many wonderful people. I wish your a springtime of peace, joy, and beauty!
March 31, 2024
In Praise of Lily-of-the-Valley
As I walk through the valley
and darkness descends,
I am unafraid.
I continue to walk
through every shadow
that is cast before me.
Where there was once
threatening clouds,
the sky has cleared.
Brightness leads my way,
and I walk on.
There, I find in the sunlight,
a field of lilies-of-the valley,
that stand before me in full bloom,
deeply rooted, possessing great beauty.
I breathe their sweet fragrance
into my grateful heart.
I am changed,
I am unafraid,
I walk on.
March 30, 2024
Fire Flower
Watch me –
I am the fire,
I am the flame,
I am a tiger lily
Rising from the garden green.
I cannot be put out,
I cannot be put down,
I am the fire.
I am the flame,
I am the flower blossoming,
Mango-colored into the air
Like a wildfire, like a spark
Fierce and free-
Watch me!
March 29, 2024
Make Your Presence Known
The clouds make their presence known.
Swirling white and gray,
Ever-moving, shapeshifting,
Becoming new, changed.
The rain makes its presence known.
Solid, steady drops -
Gray, silver, glistening,
Soaking the earth, nourishing.
The sun makes its presence known.
Shy at first, hesitating -
Peeking behind great columns of clouds,
Finding her voice at last and shining.
The daisies make their presence known,
Steadfast open door to heaven,
Showing their sunny faces,
Pure perennial beauty.
The birds make their presence known,
Taking cover under the thickets
Until the rain slowly ceases,
Then soaring with a song, into the air.
March 28, 2024
Spring Messenger
The tall, beautiful iris,
named after the Greek goddess,
a beautiful young maiden
with wings on her shoulders
who rode rainbows.
Iris traveled from cloud to sea,
connecting heaven and earth,
carrying messages from the gods.
White, yellow, deep purple, mauve pink,
Iris comes in many magical colors,
three outer petals hanging down,
three inner petals standing upright,
abundant, rugged, and reliable.
Carrying a sweet message
Spring has returned,
Courage, wisdom, and hope abide.
March 27, 2024
Where Youth and Old Age Dwell
In gardens, fields, and meadows
multicolored zinnias bloom,
favorites of butterflies and hummingbirds,
sweet nectar, cannot resist.
A beautiful New World flower,
yellow, orange, red and pale lilac petals.
The Navajo used the precious petals
to make bright yellow and red dye.
Legend tells of an ever-changing-woman
who gave yellow zinnias to a Navajo child
to help him protect the corn fields.
Zinnias now grow along with the corn.
In the center of the zinnia
a new flower appears to be
blooming within an older one -
where youth and old age dwell.
March 26, 2024
Peonies
Tight fist of petals
punch through
lush leaves.
Pink-white jolts
through the green.
Slowly, so slowly
unfolding
petal by petal.
Trusting and opening,
spreading wide,
taking in all
of blue heaven,
revealing your center,
your strength.
March 25, 2024
Bird-of-Paradise
Wings and flaming beaks,
Flashing purple-blue tails,
Bright orange crown,
Brilliant tropical color.
Look again. Can it be?
You are no bird at all!
Just long graceful petals
Sharp and striking.
Suspended, proudly perched
On a tall sturdy stem,
Rising from the fertile soil,
Ready to soar.
March 24, 2024
Springtime Sisters
Throughout the seasons
in fine trimmed gardens,
dogwood, mountain laurel, hostas,
hydrangea, and hellebore grow
alongside springtime sisters,
azalea and rhododendron –
a mutual crescendo of white, coral,
carmine, yellow, pink, and purple.
Striking spectacles in dappled shade:
Small, delicate Azalea blossoms
Sweet home for hummingbirds,
in autumn she loses her leaves,
while Rhododendron bears
fragrant trumpet-shaped flowers.
She keeps her large oval leaves,
Evergreen and ever true.
March 23, 2024
I survived a 15-hour drive from South Carolina to New Jersey! Whoo! Hoo! Today, I’m thinking about tulips and their incredible history. They are cultivated and don’t grow wild, except in parts of Eurasia and Africa. Their native ranges is from Portugal and Morocco to western China.
Springtime Love
Years and years ago,
Persian poets celebrated
the beauty of the tulip.
Three centuries later,
they grew in palace gardens
of the Ottoman Empire.
Then brought to Holland,
flourished and prospered,
a welcome sign of spring.
At first, small and bright red,
tulips were magically transformed
into flaming shades of color.
Once rare and expensive,
Now, ordinary beauties,
Everyone’s springtime love.
March 22, 2024
Today, my thoughts turn to the lilac. This flower was also one of my mother’s favorites. When I see them blossoming, I think of her and sweet memories return. As I researched this flower, I came across the myth of Pan and Syringa. Syringa is derived from from Ancient Greek word syrinx meaning “pipe.” I am finding all these flower myths, legends, and connections very interesting!
Awakening
Oh, the smell of spring!
Fragrant lilacs billowing
over the pergola,
creating a mantle
for bees and butterflies.
Pan, god of wild nature,
in love with nymph, Syringa,
chased her through the forest,
but she turned herself
into a sweet lilac bush.
Pan found the lilac
and made its branches
into a panpipe, filling the air
with sweet perfume,
spring’s song awakening.
March 21, 2024
I love bleeding heart flowers. They are the quintessential symbol of spring for me. Somehow, they don’t even look quite real. They look more like some beautiful piece of jewelry or some silk decoration for a beautiful spring bonnet. I did some research and found their legend.
Unconditional
Pendulous pink and white
heart-shaped flowers
suspended from curve branches.
Folded blooms tell a story –
gifts to a fickle princess,
unrequited love.
Sorrow-filled prince,
no longer has a will to live,
leaves his princess grieving.
Rose-pink bleeding hearts,
unconditional love,
return every year in spring.
March 20, 2024
Thinking about the wildflowers that bloomed in my backyard when I was young. I loved that house because of those wildflowers. The house itself was a small, rust-colored Cape Cod. But the backyard was immense and there was a hillside with all kinds of wildflowers. My imagination grew up in that meadow. Here’s a poem to pay homage to that memory.
Wildflowers
The hillside of my childhood imagination
is covered with flowers in wild abundance:
Black-eyed Susan, Queen Anne’s Lace,
Sweet peas, daisies, and snapdragons.
Bees hovering above each flower,
suspended, drunk on pollen.
Their happy feet stained like the sun,
dancing on and on in the spring air.
I’d climb up the hillside,
bending and stooping
with a small pair of scissors,
gathering spring in my hands.
Running into the house,
reaching for a glass jar,
filling it with cool water,
colors of spring for my mother.
March 19, 2024
I still have dandelions on my mind. I love that they go through a golden then a silver puff stage, and that old stage is the time when they disperse their seeds. In this way, the cycle goes on and on. In addition, the lowly dandelion is edible and has significant health benefits. Dandelions contain antioxidants, support liver health, fight inflammation, help to manage blood sugar, and may lower blood pressure. My grandmother used to pick dandelions and put the leaves in salads, soups, and stews. She also dried the leaves and made dandelion tea. It was too bitter for me as a child, but I loved going out with her and picking the dandelions.
Dandelion
A weed in the garden
Stands tall,
Straight stem.
First budding golden,
Then as you age
You declare
Your mighty beauty.
Silver-seeded and proud,
Rising above the intentional flowers
Planted with purpose
In uniform rows.
Your jagged leaves spread,
You boldly proclaim,
"Here are my precious seeds!"
The wind hears and blows.
Pieces of you scatter
In every direction,
Covering the earth.
March 18, 2024
I was inspired again by yet another blogger! Three in a row! That is surely good luck! Molly Hogan’s post, “Weed or Flower?” delved into the subject of publication rejection. I’ve had many of my writings rejected, but not as many as I should have had! I often don’t send in my writings to be judged because I don’t want them to be rejected. However, Molly put rejection into perspective: “ All of my rejected poems are rather like a bouquet of weeds. A rejection doesn’t fundamentally change them or make them unworthy. It might simply mean they weren’t in the right place at the right time.” I am so glad Molly’s poem, “On Eating Your Emotions” was accepted for publication! Congratulations, Molly!
I wrote Dandelion many years ago as part of a poetry novel. I’ve reworked it here making it into stanzas and adding a bit more description. Thanks, Molly for inspiring me to revise and keep on trying to publish!
Dandelion
Your golden head rises –
out of the rusty rubble.
ready now to blossom,
but you’re just another weed.
You push your way out –
between cracks in the sidewalk,
among rocks, bricks,
and bits of broken glass.
You grow strong –
impervious to your surroundings,
your leaves, jagged toothed,
spread green along the old gray ground.
You are not discouraged –
you’ve never depended
upon rain or fertilizer.
you provide your own sunlight.
March 17, 2024
I wanted to create a poem for Saint Patrick’s Day. Cathy at Doodads and Doodles blogged about having a cold and wrote a poem using the Tricube form. I thought I’d try my hand at it. Thanks, Cathy at for the inspiration and I hope your poem helped to cure your cold!
Irish Rose
Irish Rose,
Wild delight,
Youth regained.
Irish Rose,
Blush of spring,
Beauty waits.
Irish Rose,
Garden dream,
Love remains.
March 16, 2024
I’m interrupting my regularly scheduled flower poetry to bring an important message about baby shoes. Sally Donnelly has written two posts about her granddaughter, Aden. The first one was about buying Aden her first pair of shoes, and the second one was about entertaining Aden with children’s songs. As I read, a song came into my head that wouldn’t leave! I had fun and tried to throw in some reference to flowers. Thanks to Sally and Aden for the inspiration!
Baby Needs a New Pair of Shoes
Baby, baby, baby needs
a new pair of shoes.
Laced up and tied,
pretty pink or sailor blue.
Baby, baby, baby needs
A new pair of shoes.
Baby, baby, baby needs
a new pair of shoes.
Buttons, blossoms, or bows
And red ruby sparkles too.
Baby, baby, baby needs
A new pair of shoes.
Baby, baby, baby needs
a new pair of shoes.
In Mary Janes or sneakers
Dancing all the day through.
Baby, baby, baby needs
A new pair of shoes.
Baby, baby, baby needs
a new pair of shoes.
Months on months pass,
Little feet grew.
Baby, baby, baby needs
A new pair of shoes!
March 15, 2024
Hurrah! The Ides of March
The garden is left mud-frosted,
battered and barren from
late snow and spring rain,
starved of light for months.
Hurrah for the Ides of March!
Mid-month is here,
yearning for April’s
lush new growth.
Carefully, quietly earth moves,
pushed up by spring ears
of new green leaves –
color with follow.
Spring is underway
erasing winter’s blight.
Blooming and blossoming -
the hyacinth and crocus return.
March 14, 2024
Within Reach
Wintry dark brown branches
soon show small green buds.
Uncurling the buds open
into flat white petals
bearing a sweet aroma
in the center of each bloom.
When I see these
new white blossoms
of the flowering pear tree,
I remember my father-in-law
loved their appearance
as the first sign of spring.
He’s been gone almost
ten years now,
but their lovely faces –
white with delicate pink
greet me and remind me
spring is just within reach.
March 13, 2024
Resurrection
March rain fell,
fierce and flooding.
Lightning struck,
opening the dark sky
with a jagged crack.
Wind and rain
pelted windowpanes,
rooftops, and railings
mercilessly whipping
everything its path.
In the morning
the only victim
was the magnolia tree
with its fragrant white
luscious flowers.
Our graceful tree,
a herald of spring’s arrival,
the promised sweetness
and warm days to come,
laid split on the wet ground.
The arborist assessed the damage,
salvaged thirty small cuttings,
which will grow over the winter.
Next spring, when weather warms,
the magnolia will bud again.
March 12, 2024
Perseverance
The Lenten Rose
freckled with color,
green, maroon, pink.
Garnet to ruby,
lilac to lavender,
cream to white.
Not a garden rose at all,
rather a blooming evergreen,
part of the buttercup family.
Rose-like flower bud,
five-petal flower,
single or double blossom.
Growing on a carpet
of tranquil green
in dappled sunlight.
Its delicate face
nods downwards,
protecting it from the rain.
March 11, 2024
Reflection
Yellow trumpets of daffodils
ring in the dullest spring day.
Golden, cluster together
on the green hillsides and
among the dappled shade
of an ancient woodland,
or pushing up through the
grasses of a damp meadow,
leaning over the pond’s edge,
admiring its own reflection.
Bright light, new beginnings,
Spring solitude.
March 10, 2024
Hidden
Along the trail
this spring morning,
tiny flowers bloom
beside the just-greening
fallow meadow.
Hidden under leaves,
almost unnoticed,
three petal trillium -
white, yellow, blush,
and red – wake robin,
rise gracefully above
a trinity of green leaves.
Grace, strength, and compassion
look upon this fragile beauty,
protecting it in its place
in this gentle woods.
March 9, 2024
Hope
When Eve was cast out
of the Garden of Eden,
a continuous snow fell.
The earth became cold and barren.
As Eve sat weeping,
down came and an angel,
to comfort Eve.
He caught a snowflake,
and breathed upon it.
The delicate snowflake fluttered,
and sunk into the ground,
Eve’s eyes cast down,
and up through the melted the snow
sprung a tiny white blossom –
a snowdrop brought hope
to the world again.
March 8, 2024
Love Whispers
Among the primroses,
trailing purple lobelia,
and sweet alyssum,
cheerful pansies with
upturned faces
brighten the cool garden.
Large heart-shaped
Overlapping blue, yellow,
and white petals
grow and bloom like magic.
Just waiting to be plucked.
Bend your head down low,
Listen – your love whispers.
March 7, 2024
Hyacinths
Long bright green leaves,
flowers bloom
in the spring garden,
Flamboyant flowers
on tall spires
appear in thick clusters:
shades of blue, purple,
white, pink, and red,
bell-shaped blooms.
small, deeply fragrant
Return every year.
March 6, 2024
Forsythia
Golden like the sunrise.
an ancestor to the olive,
forsythia bloom brilliant yellow
on naked brown branches
in early in spring.
Bees and butterflies
hover and hum.
As spring turns into summer,
forsythia spread wildly or
are trimmed tightly
into a living wall,
protecting nature’s gifts.
March 5, 2024
Persistence
The rhododendron,
laden with fresh snow,
must not be deterred
by the last breath of winter.
A heavy, dead branch
curved and frost-crusted,
slumbers upon it.
A cool breeze stirs icicles
clinging from the evergreens,
which softly drips
onto its green leaves
glistening with snowmelt.
Red buds point their way
towards spring.
March 4, 2024
Hibernation
I
Following the path
Through the woods
Walking in other’s footprints
In the shallow snow,
I feel the tug from the earth,
A call from the bare branches
To come rest in the soft snow,
Sleep till spring.
II
The woods are silent,
The sun is iced-over,
Each branch, each leaf
Is frozen in space and time,
A lone woodpecker lands
Rendering a hollow sound.
III
The elm stands bare-boned,
I rest my cool cheek
Against its smooth trunk,
Take comfort from its
Immense strength,
Sturdy persistence,
Acknowledging the life within.
March 3, 2024
March Morning
Bare branches
fringe the sullen sky,
haunting and motionless.
Even the birds are too cold
to venture out
this March morning.
The slate-gray stones,
which border the garden
are stamped with lichen -
Gray, white, pale green,
like alien snowflakes,
delicate and different.
The earth rests patiently
settling in under compost,
mulch, burlap blankets.
Tufts of grass still green
poke through a thin layer
of fresh fallen snow.
Golden oak leaves
lie frozen in a puddle
suspended till spring.
March 2, 2024
Revival
Early bloomer,
a welcome sight,
peeking up –
pushing through frost
and late winter snow:
orange, pink, white, yellow.
low to the ground,
budding, open faces,
golden towards the sun,
strong perfume beckoning bees,
becoming a carpet of color,
Heralding spring.
March 1, 2024
Anticipation
Winter is fading
the snow, leaving
the grass yellow,
matted down,
barely alive.
Birds come wondering
if this sudden warmth
is just temporary.
Tree buds hold tight
- not yet the time
to blossom and bloom.
Winter holds on
a bit longer.
Joanne,
Glad to see comments on! I’m really here to whine! You see, that first line in your poem is a lie! LOL! It has been snowing here all day—almost. We started w/ rain, and then snow began about six hours ago and is still falling. I want the spring in your poem! I still think about your bird poems from last March. I’m running out of ways to praise your writing, which is always so beautiful.
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I remember your birds from last year and look forward to your spring poems this year. Maybe they will help me to find more joy in spring (this is my least favorite season!). This week I had tree buds and ice on the hood of my car on my way to school. Yes, winter is still holding on.
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Your poetry is beautiful and what a great idea to focus on poetry about a certain topic for all 31 days.
There is so much imagery in your poem from today. I can actually visualize the flowers peeking up ever so slightly.
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Joanne,
Talking about winter holding on, we had 10” of snow from last night into early afternoon. It’s wet and heavy! I need spring!!
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Beautiful poems and I wish you a happy birthday and a wonderful year ahead.
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Joanne, I love the imagery and rhythm of your poems. What a gift to bless yourself with, and what a great idea! I do love flowers and spring! Loved your line: becoming a carpet of color! I’m looking forward to reading your poetry!
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Day 3: You’re channeling my frozen world. This poem is ethereal, and the birds unwilling to come out speaks to the silence their absence creates. Love this poem, Joanne.
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This is beautifully written. I love your description of the lichen on the rocks-
“are stamped with lichen –
Gray, white, pale green,
like alien snowflakes,
delicate and different.”
Such a unique comparison- moss to snowflakes.
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I loved all of the pictures your poem painted. I liked the comparison of lichen to alien snowflakes. We are lucky that the snow is gone and the sun is shining today.
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I’m happy that I can comment now on your blog posts! What a fabulous idea to adopt a poetry theme for these months. That’s a wonderful idea for book planning if you were hoping to publish – – it meets a goal and keeps it in daily manageable steps. I like how you’re doing this with birds and spring, and I also like that Revival has a shape that looks like an angel and uses the word heralding – – it looks like an angel and a flower too.
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Thanks, Kim. My thinking is to put the birds and spring together into a self-published book. This format keeps me writing every day, which I find hard to do sometimes. I hadn’t noticed that Revival was shaped like an angel, but I’ve been thinking about angels lately and then your comment came – it was like a Godwink!
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Joanne, I love this idea. Here’s to a great chapbook full of spring tidings! “Sturdy persistence, acknowledging the life within” is such a beautiful thought. I like the transition from winter to spring in your 3/3 poem.
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Joanne, I love your poetry. Today, the sensory appeal is especially strong. I feel that pull nature can have on our souls. I feel the face resting against the tree. Truly lovely imagery. “Sleep till spring” is such a perfectly delivered line!
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Joanne, I’m delighted to have found your SOL poems for spring. They’re stunningly beautiful – so many musical, vivid lines. I adore the images of you resting your cheek against the elm and gaining strength, and all the birds, and the earth tugging and rippling with newness…this I think is what poetry-writing does for us!
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Joanne,
Your poem today and the one yesterday capture our not spring world. I particularly love the resilience of the rhododendron and the ice covered sun. I feel that icy cold! Gorgeous poems.
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Joanne, wow, I love the color in your poem today. I so enjoyed Red buds point the way. Redbud trees are always a strong sign of spring here. Your poetry is inspiring!
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I love forsythia! I have been wanting to get one for our yard for a while. Maybe I will now after reading this poem! I look forward to more poems about spring!
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I learned something from your poem. I didn’t know that forsythia and olive plants were related.
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I love your ending line today. The sense of protection is comforting.
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Beautiful poetry! Such a good idea to focus on the topic of spring as a gift to yourself. I love, especially, the one on hibernation – catching the liminal transition to spring,
I feel the tug from the earth,
A call from the bare branches
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A poetic spring writing adventure sounds super uplifting. I just discovered the first snowdrops peeking from the ground. They made me immensely happy.
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After 85 degrees we are going to have another visit from winter at 40+degrees, so your winter poems are speaking to me today. ’Winter is fading’ but not yet! Love your poetry. :)
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“Listen—your love whispers” the perfect last line. I am so lucky to be part of your preview audience. “Bees and butterflies/hover and hum…” Yum! (I do miss forsythia out here. NJ had them to brag about…but we have rhododendrons that endure, so nature is kind.)
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“My thinking is to put the birds and spring together into a self-published book.” I love this writing goal. Birds and flowers give me so much joy. P.S. cool fact: I didn’t know the forsythia was ancestor to the olive tree. I haven’t made it over to the Greenery (our local plant/flower shop), but your poems make me feel like I have!
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Joanne, I love your ending lines;
Bend your head down low,
Listen – your love whispers.
I also love the color and joy your poem shares today.
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Joanne,
All my life I read and heard blame cast at Eve’s feet. It’s refreshing to read your spring poem treating Eve w/ tenderness and framing her as the embodiment of hope.
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Wow! Your poem is amazing. I love the sequence! Truly powerful and beautiful poem! Your craft is inspiring!
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Lovely poems which bring those moments alive.
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Gorgeous poem, Joanne! I love the end, the image of the trumpet, and the daffodil gazing at itself.
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I nature journaled about the Lenten Rose- Hellebore on Saturday. I have one bud with its head tipped downwards with an edge of light pink. Can’t wait for it to open.
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Joanne, your magnolia tree poem is powerful. I can feel the loss of such a beautiful tree, but I’m glad it ends with a positive note, sharing that the cuttings by an arborist will be planted next year.
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You brought us the storm, the loss of your tree, and then a bit of hope from those cuttings. I was so grateful the poem ended with optimism – and I look forward to an update next year (fingers crossed for you).
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3/13/2024 – I love the resurrection of the magnolia. What a perfect and hopeful title. As I read the devastation of the storm, I knew there was going to be good news in the end.
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The thought of the magnolia tree probe on the ground breaks my heart. These storms and their rage are symptoms of climate change. I’m glad the arborist gives hope for new blooms.
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You are creating a beautiful gift for yourself and your readers.
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Me again, Joanne: I’ve just read your last three offerings, “Within Reach,” “Resurrection,” and “Perseverance” – each so interconnected and intertwined, like vines that grow together, each blooming in its own way. The remembrance of your father-in-law, the loss of the magnolia but with salvaged cuttings, and the Lenten Rose which is really an evergreen…they all speak to hope and faith that so mark this season; for why else should spring exist but as a reminder that all things hall be made new? I find my own strength renewed in the reading. Thank you for sharing the beauty that you find.
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Joanne, your poem today really tugged at my heartstrings. Beautiful and touching poem. It’s amazing how certain things will remind us of special people. I am in awe of your craft!
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Joanne,
I’m still awaiting buds here, but the snow is receding, and yesterday I saw a robin out my front window, so I’m celebrating the Ides of March and the race toward April!!
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Love the shape of your poem today! I hear the joy of spring throughout this one. Loved “quietly earth moves”.
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Joanne, your Ides of March poem sounds regal and Shakespearean. Well done. I especially like the sound of the first stanza, and I reread it aloud.
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That is a lovely poem about the baby needing shoes 🙂
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Joanne, the lullaby rhythm is an absolute delight; I can hear it being sung to a baby. The images are so sweet. There’s love behind these shoe selections and then, yes, the need – oh, how quickly the babies grow! So glad you captured this precious poem that was singing in your head.
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I’m delighted w/ your Irish rose poem. Alas, I’ve been thinking about Ireland all day. We traveled there in 2018, and I long to return.
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I love how you used a mentor text to craft your Irish Rose poem.
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Joanne, I love today’s format and that final line “love remains”. Beautiful! Perfect flower for St. Patrick’s Day.
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Thank you. I have never been there but it is on my bucket list!
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I enjoyed your Tricube. Your second stanza stood out to me, especially the lines – “blush of spring, beauty waits”.
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This form worked perfectly for your Irish Rose poem. I loved the last lines of each stanza.
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I love your March poems! My mom saved mine AND my daughters’ baby shoes; I connected with that poem, for sure! Happy St. Patrick’s Day!
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Joanne, I love how you are drawing so much inspiration from other Slicers and crafting such beautiful poems that the world needs… Dandelion is so full of hope. These bright little “lion’s-teeth” grow almost anywhere; they flourish in. the hard and broken places; they aren’t dependent and provide their own sunlight. Such might lessons from a little but lovely weed!
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I love the Dandelion poem. It shows the flower’s resilience, which mimics real life. What a beautiful poem!
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